Saturday, September 14, 2019
How does Robert Swindells create sympathy for Link, and homeless people, in his novel, Stone Cold? Essay
In the novel ââ¬Å"Stone Coldâ⬠, Swindells tries to create a sympathetic atmosphere for, one of the main characters, ââ¬Å"Linkâ⬠and other homeless people in general. To do this; he uses a variety of techniques in his novel to help get the reader too sympathise with Link and the other homeless people. The first technique he uses is first person narrative. This is shown when Link says; ââ¬Å"they avoid looking at me. Right now Iââ¬â¢m sitting in a doorway watching the passers-byâ⬠. This uses first person narrative as the words ââ¬Å"meâ⬠and ââ¬Å"Iââ¬â¢mâ⬠have been used, meaning Link is saying it. He implies that it is the pedestrians trying to ââ¬Å"avoidâ⬠him, acting like he is not there. As if heââ¬â¢s invisible. Which is shown when Swindells uses the word ââ¬Å"theyâ⬠- also making the reader feel as if Link is addressing them, engaging the reader, making them feel pity and guilt towards Link. He also uses first person narrative when he says, ââ¬Å"It was still dark, and bitterly cold as I began to peel of my sleeping bagâ⬠. Again, he uses first person narrative as he uses the words ââ¬Å"meâ⬠and ââ¬Å"Iâ⬠. This creates sympathy as he uses strong words like ââ¬Å"bitterlyâ⬠which makes emphasises the fact how col d he is. As words like ââ¬Å"darkâ⬠has been used it gives the reader an insight of linkââ¬â¢s feelings of how frightened he is, as he ââ¬Å"peelsâ⬠of his sleeping bag, constantly in pain- in the depths of despair. Secondly, the author creates sympathy by showing the reasons for becoming homeless, how easy it seems to become homeless and that itââ¬â¢s not always their fault for ending up on the streets. This is shown right at the beginning of the book when Link states; ââ¬Å"But thatââ¬â¢s not why I ended up like this. No Vincentââ¬â¢s to blame for thatâ⬠. As soon as the reader finishes reading this, they are instantly curious of: Who Vincent is? Why he done what he did? Also, how he done it? This is emphasised when Link says, ââ¬Å"Vincent is to blame.â⬠Using a short sentence and leaving the reader on a cliff-hanger. This creates sympathy for Link as it shows how it was not in any way linkââ¬â¢s fault for becoming how he is and makes the reader think of what dreadful thing Vincent done too make a fourteen year-old boy run away from his warm, safe and secure on the ââ¬Å"Stone Coldâ⬠pavementsâ⬠, in the freezing, frightening and reckless streets of London. Thirdly, when Link arrives in London it is his very first time, during this time period he is presented to be very naà ¯ve; making many vital mistakes which can never be fixed. This is shown as Link uses the metaphor, ââ¬Å"Youââ¬â¢re on the old downward spiral and thatââ¬â¢s that,â⬠When Link says the word ââ¬Å"oldâ⬠in the metaphor to describe the ââ¬Å"spiralâ⬠it makes it seem as if Link has many mistakes before Link was homeless, causing the reader too sympathise with Link. Also, Link stats; ââ¬Å"that was my second mistakeâ⬠, causing the reader too expect more mistakes too come in the nearby future. The fact that Link uses a metaphor, heightens the fact that once you make the first crucial mistake. Thereââ¬â¢s no going back. Fourthly, Swindells creates sympathy by showing that there is no government aid or support for Link and the other homeless people. This is implied during Linkââ¬â¢s search for money when he says; ââ¬Å"You mean Iââ¬â¢ll get no benefit- nothing?â⬠The author creates sympathy as he makes the government seem like they are doing nothing to help Link, making the reader portray an egotistical image of them. After he says this he adds ââ¬Å"-nothingâ⬠to really emphasise the fact that the government isnââ¬â¢t giving Link (and the other homeless people) one single penny. This enforces the fact that link has nothing creating sympathetic atmosphere. Fifthly, the author tries to make sympathy for Link by showing how badly Link is treated by: his family, the general public, his landlord Rat face and even the other homeless people! Vince ââ¬âLinkââ¬â¢s mumââ¬â¢s boyfriend- is shown to treat Link exceedingly bad due to violence, which is shown when Link states, ââ¬Å"Vince started slapping me around the head!â⬠When this is said it builds up a reputation for Vince; making him seem like a diabolical man, giving the reader an insight of Vinceââ¬â¢s true monstrosity and show the upsetting reality of Linkââ¬â¢s depressing life. Hence sympathy created for Link. Also when the word ââ¬Å"headâ⬠is mentioned it causes the reader to feel more sympathy for Link due to the head being a very important and could seriously injure someone; showing the sheer hatred of Vince towards Link. The dreaded Landlord, known as ââ¬Å"Rat-faceâ⬠, also treats Link horribly, this is shown when Link says; ââ¬Å"He had a bunch if my shirt in his fist and his face was an inch away from mineâ⬠This creates sympathy towards Link as it shows how threatening Rat-face is being towards the fourteen year old boy, Link. When words like, ââ¬Å"fistâ⬠are used it give the reader a sense of danger and helplessness from Link; making the landlord over-powering, intimidating and a more authoritative person. Link is also shown disrespect from other homeless people who show no mercy towards him, this is shown when the other homeless man says; ââ¬Å"Sod off, kiddo, before I drop yerâ⬠As the man states the word, ââ¬Å"kiddoâ⬠it reminds the reader how young and vulnerable Link is towards other threatening people. It also shows that the homeless person know he is young; portraying an evil image of the man as he bully Links around. Sixthly, the author creates sympathy by the use of detailed description of the terrible weather conditions endured by Link and the other homeless people. This is shown when Link says,â⬠Spend one January night in a doorway and youââ¬â¢ll know whyâ⬠Link tells the reader how harsh the weather is without actually describing it; he implies how disgraceful it is by saying ââ¬Å"youââ¬â¢ll know whyâ⬠making a cliff-hanger and causing an effect on the reader as they are left to make up in their minds what horrendous conditions Link ââ¬â and the other homeless people- had to stay in. Link also says; ââ¬Å"It was dark and bitterly cold as I began to peel of my sleeping bagâ⬠As the author adds extra detailed words like, ââ¬Å"bitterlyâ⬠it gives the reader a real sense of the sheer coldness of being on the streets. Swindells also says the phrase; ââ¬Å"peel of my sleeping bagâ⬠showing how uncomfortable Link is and how easy tasks can become very difficult. Link also states, ââ¬Å"It was raw morning with a sneaky wind which came out of the side streets and went right through youâ⬠Swindells emphasises how freezing cold it is by using the metaphor; ââ¬Å"went right through youâ⬠getting the reader to feel for Link and sympathise with him as he is forced to be prey to the brutal winds. Also when the term, ââ¬Å"raw morningâ⬠is used it gives the reader an idea of fresh; yet bitter conditions. Seventhly, and finally, sympathy is created as a sense danger is found throughout the whole novel of ââ¬Å"Stone Coldâ⬠. As soon as Link becomes homeless he soon becomes aware of the dangers, this is shown when Link states; ââ¬Å"There are guys so desperate or so crazy, theyââ¬â¢ll knife you or batter your head in for your sleeping bag and the coppers youââ¬â¢ve got in your pocketâ⬠When this is said it gives the reader a sense of despair and how much people will do for so little. Also, as Link is going through this it makes the reader sympathetic for Link as they realise his helplessness and how heââ¬â¢s at the Brink if despairâ⬠¦Also in Shelterââ¬â¢s narrative he says; ââ¬Å"Nobody knows theyââ¬â¢re there, theyââ¬â¢re invisible.â⬠When this is says it shows how professional Shelter is at murdering people; giving the reader a real sense of danger for Link as he has many encounters with this skilled murderer, showing Linkââ¬â¢s vulnerability . When shelter says; ââ¬Å"Theyââ¬â¢re invisibleâ⬠he uses a metaphor to show that no one will ever find them and itââ¬â¢s like the victims are not even there. In conclusion Robert Swindells uses many successful ways and techniques to create sympathy for Link and the other homeless people in his novel, ââ¬Å"Stone Coldâ⬠This builds up to create a sympathetic atmosphere throughout the whole of the book.
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